Sandra asks…Can you help edit my essay !? 10 PTS !?I Got a level 3+ on it cause my organization was bad
she told me to edit it, & I did , but not sure it's the best .
I was sure I was gonna get a level 4 but she said my fluency was fine I just needed my organization. Can you help edit ?
I'm in grade 8 Thanks
It's about cell phones & it's a persuasive essat
The Negative Impact of a Positive Invention
By: Laura
As the role of technology in daily life steadily increases, one has to